It is a fast paced and interesting story sure to appeal to young people. The characters of Malaya, and her sister Alice are fleshed out well. Making Robert’s character more detailed will add to the story. Both sisters use their bodies to get ahead in life and this could be attributed to their life experiences and insecurities. This is something that could be explored in the next book in the series.
It needs a good editor to remove some of the grammar and punctuation errors. Overall, it is an interesting book which could truly become good with a few changes. I loved the gritty story
line and the details of the city’s underbelly. I am looking
forward to the next book in the series.